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Broken Hegemony

You never understand these things-
These imaginary questions which roam inside your head
The long, forgotten wilderness you left behind with time
Now, the dry defenseless sorrow in a solemn futile land.

You never question anything-
This seemingly endless hegemony which builds with each new day
The assurance of your life-span’s dream, held within your grasp
Now, the slow dissolving tears in a lover’s wishful past.

You never knew what love would bring-
This contentment that shivers in a pool that bubbles with excitement
The boundless, infinite trivial smiles which conform to happiness
Now, the beating of a heart lost forever in abyss.
©2007-2009 ~britbratsama
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Yes, I've been thoroughly betrayed my my so-called "lover". It hurts to no end when he decides to announce to not just you, but everyone, that he doesn't feel a thing for you... he doesn't LOVE you anymore.

And what even sadder...our anniversary is next week. And he can't decide to love me or not. And now I've lost everything... because of him and I never saw it coming.


copyright to Brittany Horton (c) 12/3/07

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A truly beautiful piece my dear. You have turned your saddness into a thing of beauty, and that is more than most can do. You have talent beyond your knowledge for someone of such a young age, and wisdom beyond your years.

Whomever this boy is (and by boy, I truly mean "boy") he does not understand what a passionate, insightful, poignant person you are.

If he did, those words would not so long be stuck between his wretched teeth.

Regardless, I extend my kudos to your creation and empathy to your condition.
Your work is beautiful as always. Sorry to hear the news and I hope things will work out for the best and if not the best then the better.

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A secret passion,
The shy and gentle lover,
Dreaming of tales untold,
Show the sweet fantasy,
To the bitter reality.
thank you so much, i hope so too- tho hope is shortly running out. i hope the phrase "the best is yet to come" is true ...REALLY.

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"Life is like a tootsie pop... you keep going until you get to the middle then realize it was just shit desguised as candy."
- Amanda Kidd
I'm glad you liked it. As for talent, yours FAR exceeds mine. lol, I've never heard someone with such grand use of vocabulary as you! Honestly, I read your poems to anyone I can find who'll listen.

Your works are too good to be left sitting on the profile pages of deviant. They are so ingenious that I hardly find it possible that you haven't been picked up by a publishing company yet!

As for the "boy" lol, he's that in every sense of the word. But... sometimes he's not. He's very schitzy.

It would be a lie to say I didn't love him, regardless if he felt the same for me; however, I find myself regretting love in the highest pinancle. Sadly, when love turns to scorn... you know there's a problem.

Thank you so much for the comments and support. :D

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"Life is like a tootsie pop... you keep going until you get to the middle then realize it was just shit desguised as candy."
- Amanda Kidd
*example: I friggen misspelled pinancle haha. I can't even USE vocabulary RIGHT! it's pinnacle for those of you who see how dumb I am*

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"Life is like a tootsie pop... you keep going until you get to the middle then realize it was just shit desguised as candy."
- Amanda Kidd

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