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“Undying love, forgotten sorrow, blissful morn, bleak tomorrow…”
Remembered not for who I am or heard for words I speak
Reminiscence known forever- only by a pen tip’s gleam.
©2008-2009 ~britbratsama
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Submitted: April 28, 2008
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Well this was ONE of my so-called "entrees" that I could have (SHOULD HAVE!) sent in to the "timeless contest" hosted by *PoetryPlease

I'm sad that I didn't make the deadline but tell me what yall think!! :D
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*favs* i love it :glomp:

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-tnracegirl
Very nice for a 3 line poem. :XD:

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And in case you were wondering,
You are like a sunset to me.
You're all kinds of beautiful as you end my day,
And you sweetly retire as the stars chase you away...
-Sunsets and Carcrashes by Spill Canvas
thank you!!

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"Life is like a tootsie pop... you keep going until you get to the middle then realize it was just shit desguised as candy."
- Amanda Kidd
haha thanx :D

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"Life is like a tootsie pop... you keep going until you get to the middle then realize it was just shit desguised as candy."
- Amanda Kidd
your welcome ^^

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-tnracegirl
you're welcome =D

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And in case you were wondering,
You are like a sunset to me.
You're all kinds of beautiful as you end my day,
And you sweetly retire as the stars chase you away...
-Sunsets and Carcrashes by Spill Canvas
;___________; DARN IT BRITTANY! darn you for not ENTERING! AGGHHH!!!
this is like the poem to represnt all the writers. YOU SHOULDVE SUBMITTED IT!!! >________< afgahfsgfhasgdjsf
you're still a winner in my heart 8D lolol!

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[INSERT COOL AND WITTY SIGNATURE HERE]
I like it. It's true, though.

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Go then-there are other worlds than these. -Jake from The Dark Tower

\"When I tell you to jump"
\"I ask \'How high\'"
\"No, you don\'t say anything, just jump.\"

There is a song I sing of change, a song for hope, a song for faith. -1997
thank you :)

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"Life is like a tootsie pop... you keep going until you get to the middle then realize it was just shit desguised as candy."
- Amanda Kidd

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